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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement that parents are the best teachers?
I agree with statement that parents are the best teachers. First, nowadays, most parents are knowledgeable. They are the one who love their children first. So if they want to teach their children, they will try to do that. And second, we spend a lot of time with our parents when we are in childhood and when we are learning something instinctly. The last, I think it is, although our parents have something weakness, no one is perfect in the world. So parents are the best teachers.
4 try to do that
1 they are the one————they are the ones
2 So (delete)
3 And (delete)
1 love their children first————love their children the most
2 when we were in chilldhood————during childhood
4 the last————the last reason
5 when we learn something instinctively————so we learn things instinctively
I agree with statement that parents are the best teachers. First, … parents are knowledgeable and they are the ones who love their children the most. If they want to teach their children, they would try to ….Second, we spent a lot of time with our parents during childhood, so we learn things instinctively. The last reason is that although parents have faults and weaknesses, no one is perfect in this world. So that’s why I think parents make the best teachers.
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