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  2020年11月21日教育类(观点类)

  Some people think that all young people should be required to have full-time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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  Nowadays, there is some debate as to whether young people should be required to attend school full-time until they are at least 18 years old. Personally, I think it is crucial for all young people to go through this kind of educational system.

  First of all, a full-time education gives young people enough time and opportunity to cultivate their academic knowledge. It allows students to learn about wide variety of subjects over a course of many years, which enables them to master indispensable academic subjects such as math, science, literature and history. This not only provides students with a well-rounded education, but also boosts their odds of getting accepted into university. For instance, in my country you must have a high school diploma in order to be accepted into a reputable university. In turn, a college degree is necessary for people to land a stable and lucrative job. Therefore, a full-time education is essential to having a successful career.

  In addition, compulsory full-time education gives young people the opportunity to develop their social skills. Young people are surrounded by other students in school and often have to work on group projects, participate in group discussions and attend extracurricular activities. As a result, students have no choice but to socialize with other students and establish meaningful friendships throughout their educational career. Moreover, students must also learn to communicate effectively with their teachers and learn from their guidance. By receiving a full-time education, young people can significantly improve their interpersonal skills, which prepares them for their professional careers.

  In conclusion, I believe that young people should certainly be required to receive a full-time education until they are 18 because it gives them the opportunity to expand their knowledge and develop useful communication skills.

  cultivate their academic knowledge 培养他们的学术知识

  indispensable 不可或缺的,必要的

  well-rounded education 全面发展的教育

  boosts their odds 增加他们的几率

  reputable university 声誉好的大学

  lucrative 获利多的

  develop their social skills 发展他们的社交技能

  interpersonal skills 人家交往的能力

  范文解析:

  这是一篇教育类的观点型大作文,作者采用了一边倒的写作结构。首先,开头段中作者通过改写题目的方法来呈现主题,并且在首段就表明了自己的观点。其次,在主体段中,作者论述了主要使用了两个论点来完成对于“学生是否应该接受full time 教育至少直到18岁”这一话题的论述。在第一个主体段中,作者首先提出第一个论点:给学生足够的时间和很好的机会能够培养他们的学术知识,紧接着作者通过3-4句话对于这一论点进行解释和说明,并且。在第二个主体段中,作者提出了第二个论点:这样可以让学生发展与人交往的一些社交技巧。

  一边倒的写作结构是观点类写作题目的常见写作结构,这篇文章中的主体段主要使用了观点-论述-举例的主体段写作方法。这种类型的大作文写作方法在惠尚学2019雅思写作教材中第六课第七课中有详细的讲解,如果大家想学习更多的写作技巧,欢迎来惠尚学上课。

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