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  2020年12月19日 饼图

  These charts below shows the energy percentage produced from five different sources in 1995 and 2003.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

  

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  The two pie charts depict the changes in energy percentage produced from five different sources in 1995 and 2003.

  It is clear from the charts that of the five sources, oil is the prevailing energy source, though the percentage dropped significantly from 59% in 1995 to 39% in 2003. The second most popular energy source—nuclear—increased moderately from 23% in 1995 to 31% in 2003.

  The percentage of coal, which made up the third most used energy source in 1995, increased slightly from 8% in 1995 to 12% in 2003. The percentage of highdrop experienced a more considerable increase, from 7% to 14%, exceeding the percentage of coal in 2003. Finally, the percentage of other energy sources—the least used of the five sources—increased by a mere 1%, from 3% in 1995 to 4% in 2003.

  Overall, oil and nuclear energy constitute a larger proportion of the five different sources in both 1995 and 2003, whereas coal, highdrop, and other energy sources are less commonly used.

  depict 描述,描绘

  prevailing 受欢迎的

  made up 占

  considerable increase 明显地增长

  范文解析:这是一篇饼状动态图小作文,两个饼图主要描述了两个年份的各种能源的使用情况,因为是动态图,所以这篇文章主要应该描述的是数据的变化趋势。在首段,作者先通过改写题目的方式来来呈现图表所描述的主题,在第一个主体段,作者主要针对最重要的数据进行描述,即油的使用情况。接下来第二个主体段,作者主要针对其他品种的能源的使用情况进行了一个趋势的描述。最后结尾段,作者对于上述描写的数据中主要的特征进行了一个简单的总结。这篇文章结构以及使用的常见词汇在2019年惠尚学雅思写作教材中有详细的讲解,如果大家想要了解更多的小作文知识,欢迎来惠尚学上课。

  2020年12月19日社会类(观点类)

  Nowadays young people are admiring media and sports stars, even though they do not set a good example. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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  In contemporary society, an increasing number of young people are idolizing media and sports stars, even though they may not be ideal role models. In my opinion, undue admiration of celebrities is an overall negative social trend.

  Firstly, modern media idols are generally presented to the public in a way that can give young people unrealistic expectations. Celebrities are prevalent across mass media—on TV, in magazines, on billboards, and in Hollywood movie studios. Across every medium, their faces are glamourized to perfection, and their lives are overflowing with wealth and prestige. Rather than giving an honest portrayal of their failures and flaws, mass media glorify these celebrities in ways that can be detrimental to young people. Airbrushed images of celebrities and their lifestyles give young people unrealistic and unattainable standards. If young people obsessively consume these images, they may start to feel disappointed or ashamed of themselves, which can cause their self-esteem to plummet.

  In addition, a large number of celebrities engage in unhealthy or socially taboo lifestyles, which can influence young people to do the same. Many celebrities are widely known to struggle with alcoholism or substance abuse disorders, and many have been charged for driving under the influence. If young people unquestioningly admire celebrities, then they would be more likely to engage in these behaviours themselves. Not only would they be endangering their health, but they would also be risking their academic and professional futures. Because young people are not psychologically mature, they are overall more susceptible to media influence and thus, more likely to imitate the bad behaviours of celebrities.

  To conclude, I strongly believe that the increasing admiration of celebrities, despite their negative influence, is a harmful trend.

  unrealistic expectations 不现实的期待

  mass media 大众传播媒体

  overflowing with wealth and prestige 充满了财富和威望

  detrimental to young people 对年轻人不利

  unattainable standards 无法达到的标准

  cause their self-esteem to plummet 导致他们的自尊心暴跌

  socially taboo 社会禁忌

  substance abuse disorders 药物滥用障碍

  be more likely to 更有可能去。。。

  imitate the bad behaviours of celebrities 模仿明星的糟糕行为

  范文解析:这是一篇社会类话题的大作文,文章题目的类型为观点类,这篇文章的主体结构为一边倒结构。首先首段作者使用了改写题目的方式来完成话题的呈现,然后再手段作者就明确表达了自己的观点。在主体段部分,作者是通过一边倒的主体段结构来完成的,即两个主体段都是针对同一方论点展开论述的。两个主体段的开头都使用了恰当的连接词,可以清晰地看出其逻辑关系。在第一个主体段内,作者主要论述的是明星在主流媒体上呈现的形象有可能是经过美化的,充满了对于财富和威望的崇拜,所传递的信息可能会对年轻人不利。在第二个主体段内,作者主要论点为很多明星存在生活方式的问题,比如过度饮酒或者药物依赖,如果年轻人盲目崇拜,可能会进行模仿,因此这样对他们也是不利的。通过对这两个论点的详细来论述,充分证明了作者想要表达的立场。

  最后结尾段,作者对于上文的观点进行了简单的总结。这篇文章的用词以及一些论点都是很值得学习的,并且相同的文章结构在2019年惠尚学雅思写作第八课有详细的讲解,如果各位考生想要了解更多关于写作方面的知识,欢迎来惠尚学上课。

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